Pristine white blanket

English: Rare virgin snow On the other side of...

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Pristine white blanket
Glistening ‘neath pale blue sky
Hides sin and beauty
Trampled to slush underfoot
Slippery mess makes feet wet

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About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using Stumbleupon.com, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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10 Responses to Pristine white blanket

  1. Ah! What a beautiful tanka Imaginator … so in touch with Alexey’s haiku.

  2. WabiSabi says:

    That, indeed, is the down side to snow! 🙂

  3. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    With all the crud that’s in the atmosphere these days, it’s a wonder that there’s a pristine blanket of snow anywhere!

    Special 1 and Special 2

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