In his eyes

The first time I saw him that dark night there was a snarl on his face and a look in his eyes that chilled me to the core.

In those eyes, I saw the black pit of hell.


About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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18 Responses to In his eyes

  1. Better run than negotiate in some cases.

  2. KymmInBarcelona says:

    Not the kind of face you want to meet on a dark night.

  3. Nothing like giving off that, “black pit of Hell” vibe to scare away blind dates. Lol. But seriously, I am getting a Jack the Ripper, Jeckyll and Hyde, kind of feeling from this. Encountering evil is always a scary thing. You captured that sense very well.

  4. Yikes!! Great use of a skimpy 33 words. Thanks for linking up.

  5. Oooh! Eerie! Awesome work. πŸ˜€

  6. Mike says:

    Time to go I think. A chilling tale and so well told. Great use of your 38 words.

  7. annbennett says:

    Sometimes there is nothing there, just malevolence. Looked up sciologist, learned a new word Mr. Imaginator.

  8. Rexie says:

    You saw Voldemort? Lol. Nice lines.

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