Sunset glade

English: Moss Flowers on flame in the rays of ...

English: Moss Flowers on flame in the rays of the Autumn Sunset (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

summer evening –
empty swing swaying slightly
forward … back …                                                             (c) Alexey Andreyev

Tranquil forest glade
Bronze leaves burn red in sunset
Air filled with wood-smoke                                                  The Imaginator

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About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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8 Responses to Sunset glade

  1. kaykuala says:

    Gives a hazy and putrid feel, pungent to the nose! Nicely Imaginator!


  2. Imaginator this is a wonderful haiku in response of Alexey’s one … completely different, but in the same spirt. Chapeau!

  3. Sun says:

    wood burning can smell nice in small amounts…love your haiku.

  4. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    We hope the smoke isn’t from a forest fire!

    Empty Swing

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