Stand off

Rainbow Basin Syncline near Barstow, California.

Rainbow Basin Syncline near Barstow, California. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

She’s behind that rock across the desert basin, peering at me through the scope of her rifle.

Fortunately I’ve got her compact.  Time to dazzle the myopic bitch and get out of here…

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About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using Stumbleupon.com, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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15 Responses to Stand off

  1. Saynday's Elusive Muse says:

    Nice sentences. I wanted to read more. It pulled me into the story that was almost to begin. Well done. Thank you.

  2. atrm61 says:

    Ha!ha!She has met her match;-)Good one:-)

  3. Nice! I can totally see this one happening. Great story in 33 words.

  4. ym1611 says:

    Ooooh brilliant! You can’t go wrong with mirrors 😛

  5. Christine says:

    Ha! This is reminiscent of Mr. & Mrs. Smith, somehow. 🙂

  6. theinnerzone says:

    Great story in 33! Well deserved win.

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