Eyes open; white room, hospital.

Nurse; pretty, smiling…approaching.

No time…

Snap her neck.

Somebody screams.

Get up, go to corridor.

Security guard, gunfire…look down; blood, my blood…

Sight fading…

Eyes open; white room.


About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using Stumbleupon.com, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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20 Responses to Loop

  1. Yikes! This is the second Dystopian Ground Hog Day I’ve come across. I’m looking for the escape hatch!

  2. It is Lovely to imagine someone worse off than me.

  3. KymmInBarcelona says:

    Loop indeed. And apparently no time to rethink it all. Truly distressing!

  4. I’m thinking “White Room” by Cream which would be a great sound track to this nightmare. Great entry.

  5. Draug419 says:

    It might help to do something differently in that string of events.

  6. joetwo says:

    What a horrible existence. Well written.

  7. jannatwrites says:

    Of course it can’t be a pleasurable experience that’s lived in a loop!

  8. deanabo says:

    oh my! Love the drama..

  9. grace black says:

    Eerie loop. Well done! Always enjoy your words.

  10. This gives a whole new meaning to repeating the past Thanks for linking up!

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