They had the nerve to keep him out of the loop, thereby implying he wasn’t wanted anymore; after all he’d done for them!


Their house of cards would soon topple without him.


About TheImaginator

35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using Stumbleupon.com, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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21 Responses to Discarded

  1. barbara says:

    righteousness in the end!

  2. You are so good at concise writing like this, how do you imply so much with so little, what a skill. I always feel the emotion that you have created.

  3. Well, he’s probably better off without the house of cards!

  4. zennjennc says:

    See what ya get when you don’t play nice.

  5. It’s a shame English doesn’t have a word like the German “schadenfraude”, You can’t help but wish people who shun you get a payback even though you know it is wrong.

  6. And thus spoke the Querulant

  7. atrm61 says:

    Well Karma will get them all & am sure he will find his niche:-)Lovely piece!

  8. Draug419 says:

    Sometimes all you can do is sit back and watch the fall (:

  9. jannatwrites says:

    And no doubt, it will topple with a little help from him πŸ™‚ I feel like I just got a glimpse into the mind of one of those disgruntled employees who go back just one more time…

  10. annesquared says:

    I wanted to say I like it – that’s it πŸ™‚

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