Five sentence fiction – Got it licked

the conspiracy deepens...

Damn, it’s in deep (Photo credit: Rob!)

“Almost got it…nnnnf…..nnnnnnnf…almost…”

Randolph sighed and rolled his eyes, “I really don’t see what all the fuss is about.”

“Hold still!Β  I’ve almost got it.”

“Hey, that tickles; it’s like you’re whispering in my ear!”

Mortimer swallowed, smacked his lips and licked his teeth clean before looking quizzically at Randolph, “Why on earth would I want to whisper in your ear?!”

Lillie McFerrin Writes

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35 year old sciolist living in Tokyo. I like swing dancing, Twitter word games, writing, using, reading, and watching movies. I write stuff on my blog occasionally.
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18 Responses to Five sentence fiction – Got it licked

  1. I don’t know why for sure, but this really made me laugh.

  2. Why whisper when you can lick?

  3. LOL!! Deeee-lightful! That last line was so feline.

  4. So well done, purrfect portrayal of the coolness of a cat! Well of course the cat is taking charge of things, certainly it wouldn’t be the dog! πŸ™‚

  5. McGuffyAnn says:

    This is purrfect interaction between two natural friends. Well done!

  6. Cute pic; and lovely interaction between dog and cat. x

  7. TemptingSweets99 says:

    LOL! Love this — photo and the words!

  8. sjp says:

    lovely humorous last line πŸ™‚

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