Place de la Bourse, Bordeaux (Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND)
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Everybody comes here eventually, to this place between worlds.
They call it the ‘Hub’.
I was just passing through when I met her, and so began the journey that would change my life.
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This evoked so many feelings in so few words. I wish it continued! Great piece.
Thank you; I wanted it to be the beginning of a story yet to be told.
That’s a great idea! I look forward to reading it
Y’know, maybe I will write it after all
Ooh, this is excellent! I love the sense of mystery you’ve captured in your 33 words!
Thank you
I love the idea of a pass-through! Hopefully Madame Muse will visit and suggest you turn this into a longer piece! Thanks for the follow also
I would like to turn this into a story via Trifecta prompts the same way that Trudging Through Fog did with the ‘Jade Dragon’ series. Let’s see what happens! As to following you, my pleasure
I found myself smiling through this. Well done.
Thank you. You looking forward to a saga of adventure and romance?
So amazing what you have done with so “little”, in terms of word count. I agree with other comments made about this being a story that could go in so many different directions. Let me know if you end up writing an expanded edition!
–JW
Thank you, will do
I love the idea of meeting someone in a strange place in passing. Great piece.
Thank you
I read this a few times through. It does have a a suspended feeling, The Hub, about it. And I would like to know what changes for him (or her)!
I want to write more for this – let’s see!
Oh I love a mysterious, enticing start to a good story! Love this, could be the opening line of a novel. Would love to read more.
I believe that I could write novel out of this! Thanks
Yes please write more … well done
I intend to; thanks
This is great – a wonderful opening, but intriguing in and of itself. Nicely done!
Thank you
Yes, it does sound like the beginning of an intriguing story. Write on!